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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after a six-year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
- explain why you would like the job
- give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
- say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in response to your advertisement in The Canberra Monthly yesterday.
I am so happy to find a job that is ideally suited to me and my current situation. I am currently taking a 6-month break before starting a Master’s Degree in early childhood education. I am especially interested in this position because I would very much like to have personal experience of living with an Australian family with a child.
I feel I am a good candidate for this job as I am qualified in childcare. I hold a degree in early childhood education from Siwon University, where I graduated first in my class, as noted in the attached transcript. During my education at the university, I completed 200 hours of field experience.
In my free time, I volunteer at an after-school program as an assistant teacher. When I am in Australia, I would like to continue to work with young students in order to further develop my skills and gain valuable hands-on experience in working with children. When I am not working, I would like to visit popular places in Canberra because I have always been interested in traveling and exploring new places.
I look forward to having the opportunity to meet your family soon.
Yours faithfully,
Suyoung Kim
from Siwonschool Cambridge 14 Test 1 Writing Task 1 (217 words)
I feel I am a good candidate for the position as I have 5-year experience in ~.
I am a qualified person the job requires. I have a certification from the Institute.
I am writing to express my interest in the position you posted in ~.
I am writing in response to your advertisement in the newspaper/ in the magazine/ in the book. (in the text)
I decided to quit the job to complete the course.
I am currently taking a 6-month break before starting a Master's Degree.
I graduated from Siwon University. 나는 시원대학교를 졸업했다.
I am a graduate of Siwon University. 나는 시원대학교 졸업생이다.
I am a graduate in Biology. 나는 생물학과를 전공했다.
I would like to have an interview at your earliest convenience.
I look forward to your prompt reply.
(x) I am energetic and sociable.
(o) As a team leader, I have led the team for 3 years, increasing sales by 30%.
take a break 잠시 휴식을 취하다.
gain experience 경험을 쌓다
experience of/ in
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Carola. I have seen your advertisement in a magazine and I'm writing to you because I would like to be considered for the position you are offering. I really would like to work for you because I think it will be a good experience for you and me. I like to travel, learn about different cultures, and meet new people.
I have never been to Australia but I'm pretty sure there are a lot of things to see and try. I have previous experience looking after children. Currently, I'm working for an Irish family and I take care of children whose ages vary from three to eight.
Before, I had never thought that looking after children would be that rewarding. I enjoy spending time with them and I have learned a lot. I'm really patient, tidy, reliable, and hard-working. In addition, I have just completed a first aid course.
If I had the chance to live with your family, it would be great. I would spend my free time learning English, visiting tourist attractions, trying local food and making new friends.
Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. Please feel free to contact me if you need further details and recommendations.
Kind regards,
Carola